Looking good

Ok so I wasn't sure how to let the viewer know that the father of the family has recently died without explicitly stating it. I decided to start with some setting shots of the cemetery and a picture of the family resting on a tomb. The viewer can deduce that someone has recently died, but not know who of the family, so I zoom in on the dad's face on the next scene. I used an old picture of my uncle with my brother but it works as my brother is also a redhead.  

I also shot a bunch of random shots to see if I include one at the start for the credits. For example a curious frog toy that was hanging off a tree and some pretty flowers that were moving with the wind.